Nocturne

PHOTO PROMPT Β© Dale Rogerson

Last night, outside my bedroom window

the rain serenaded

a pitter patter lullaby to wash the day away

while I waited for gutter music

my favorite nocturne

when raindrops slide down, down, down

the roof

like children on a playground

each little raindrop

meandering along a metal path until

it plinks like a hundred tiny triangles

crescendos

and brings dreams of childhood

when I first listened to the rain

outside my bedroom window

twenty thousand nights later

I wake to sunshine

and think, β€œLife is good.”

THE END
86 Words

Thanks for the photo prompt, Dale Rogerson! I zoomed in straight to the gutter, which brought back memories of listening to the rain when I was a little girl. πŸ™‚

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33 Responses to Nocturne

  1. neilmacdon says:

    I loved “gutter music”

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  2. StuHN says:

    I could hear the sounds rain makes as it comes in contact with solid things. I find it calming. Things quiet down. Just like snow.

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  3. Dear Jan,

    I awoke to the same serenade this morning. Lovely poem. I liked gutter music, too.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. Lovely lyricism to this piece, Jan.

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  5. Iain Kelly says:

    I’m with you Jan, the sound of rain against the window (or in my case the holiday caravan roof) is a soothing childhood memory.

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  6. ceayr says:

    Now that I live in the south of France, the sound of rain makes me homesick!
    I love the poem.

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  7. Alice Audrey says:

    Rain on the roof just makes me think how much it will cost to fix.

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  8. pennygadd51 says:

    A lovely lyrical celebration of rain, and of a long life lived with joy. What a great affirmation of the beauty of life!

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  9. Beautiful lyrical poem. Loved some words such as plink, nocturne , pitter patter lullaby , guitter music .

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  10. michael1148humphris says:

    Loved the sight of rain splattering on the ground, the day washed clean. Thanks for recalling memories

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  11. Lovely poem Jan, who doesn’t love these musical sounds that rain drops make.

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  12. James McEwan says:

    A musical treat, rain is the life line of humanity so make every drop count.

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  13. Wonderfully descriptive Jan

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  14. 4963andypop says:

    I love the image of raindrops in a gutter pipe as little children sliding down a slide. I also like the circular structure of the poem : how you begin, listening to the rain today, and end, listening as a child. And we see that it is good.

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  15. This is beautiful. The words are lyrical and make me think of and long to hear rain.

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  16. Loved the words you used!
    “Gutter music” was killer! πŸ˜€

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  17. Dale says:

    Absolutely beautiful, Jan.
    Love that you focused on the gutter… these prompts are great to see what people see!

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  18. granonine says:

    Beautifully poetic, Jan. Made me remember enjoying the rain on a hot summer day in Minneapolis when I was a little girl.

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  19. jillyfunnell says:

    Just lovely, totally evocative of the comforting sound of rain from inside a warm and peaceful home.

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  20. lisarey1990 says:

    Wonderfully lyrical.

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