PHOTO PROMPT © Liz Young
Drats! Mother told me to remove the wheels before locking the cage, my sanctuary from the crime scene of a world where fellow zombies threaten to eat anyone who’s different.
Did I listen? Noooo.
But, I’m not like the rest of them! And now, I’ve rolled away from my briefcase—where I hid the key.
So, now what?
I’ll sing! Because Wes Craven once said, “If I’m going to be a caged bird, I’ll sing the best song I can.”
It’s a beautiful day in the neighborhood . . . won’t you be my neighbor?
Because we’re all caged birds.
THE END
100 Words
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“We’re all caged birds”. Lovely
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There’s something that cages us all, I believe. Only when we realize this can we break free.
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Dear Jan,
I’ll admit I had to look up Wes Craven. At first I thought Maya Angelou. Definitely not where you went. 😉 The addition of Mr. Rogers’ tag line added to the creepiness factor. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m not a fan of zombies, but I suppose even they can have a heart. 🙂
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Ah, good one, Jan!
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Thank you! 🙂
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A depressing thought that we’re all caged birds really, but done with a bit of humour and optimism. Nice one 🙂
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It is a bit depressing, until we break free of what cages us. 🙂 Thanks, Iain!
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I love the line ‘We are all caged birds’
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Thanks, Siobhan!
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Damn. I hate it when I lose my keys! Poor zombie.
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Me, too, Stu. And it happens more and more often these days! 🙂 Loved your story, too!
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Trapped in a moving cage without a key? Terrifying! I really like this one – the last line is chilling.
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Drats! 🙂 Thanks for reading and commenting, Emily!
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Nicely done, funny with a touch of horror.
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Thank you, Loré. 🙂
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That’s a clever story. “My sanctuary from the crime scene of a world where fellow zombies threaten to eat anyone who’s different.” The whole world a crime scene. The ultimate in solipsism.
If we’re all caged, can we please be in an aviary all together?
I like the way you’ve written that, Jan!
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Thank you, Penny. I’m not sure if it was evident, but this was a cloaked political commentary. 🙂 We ARE all in the same aviary, IMO. Though some want their own aviary.
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Cool creepy little story. I am a big Wes Craven fan. I think you nailed it.
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Thank you, Josh. I’ll admit, I’ve never done well with scary movies. My hands are over my eyes through most of them. 🙂
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Excellent story. And I really like the Wes Craven quote.
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Thank you, Jilly!
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True, all caged birds, just in different fashions. Good take on the prompt!
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Thanks, Sascha. Loved your story!
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🙂
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Love the twist of it… some keys just ought not to be found, eh… lol!
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Or misplaced, as the case may be. 🙂 Thanks, Jelli!
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Aaargh! I can’t believe we have almost the same title and sort of thought…. well, not really, but still!
I do love this 😀
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Our stories were quite different though! I loved your caged bird’s spirit, Dale!
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Yes, indeed! Thank you, loved yours too.
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I too thought of Maya Angelou. Maybe he/she can get the cage to roll back towards the keys. Nicely done.
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How she gets out of the cage is a whole other story! Thanks, Alicia. 🙂
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A world of zombies where “zombies threaten to eat anyone who’s different.” Interesting take on the prompt and on our world today. An intriguing story! =)
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I’m glad you “got” that this was a bit of a commentary on our real world today, Brenda! Thank you!
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First time I’ve ever thought of Mr. Rogers as a caged bird. Hmmmm.
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Oops! I didn’t mean to infer this was Mr. Rogers. My intention was to show that not all “zombies” are the same. I think it was too ambitious for 100 words. 🙂
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🙂
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love the detail of the wheels, afterwards I was hooked
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Thank you! 🙂
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Poor zombie 🙂
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And poor Dr. Dang, too! 🙂
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Ha ha ha. Thank you so much Jan.
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Great detail. A very creative piece.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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There’s a real tension between the song and the rest of the story. Veeery creepy.
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Funny how a children’s song can be creepy in the right setting! 🙂
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