Celebration

PHOTO PROMPT © Fatima Fakier Deria

Celebration

The delivery man stared at the patio set he’d put together as if daydreaming.

Lost in my own contemplations, I murmured, “Perfect.”

“Perfect for what?” he asked.

Embarrassed he’d heard my musings, I replied, “A tea party.”

He snickered. “A tea party, huh? Who you gonna invite?”

“My dad. To celebrate his 90th birthday.”

He nodded. “Yeah? That’s awesome.”

A warm breeze whispered through the leaves.

“When I was a little girl, he’d sit with me at make-believe tea parties and we’d talk and talk. What better way to celebrate than sitting here with him, even if it’s only make-believe.”

THE END

This story was prompted by a Facebook post I read yesterday:

Happiness is having your 84 year old Dad call and sing “Happy Birthday” to you. 

I count my blessings my dad is still with me, that he calls me every birthday, and if I’m lucky, he’ll strum “Happy birthday” on his banjo, too. Click HERE to hear him play. 🙂

Friday Fictioneers is a compilation of writers from around the world who gather online weekly, guided by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The challenge? To write a story in 100 words or less based on a new photo prompt. Thanks to Fatima Fakier Deria for your photo that inspired a variety of fantasies before I lighted on this one.

To read more stories in an online flash fiction anthology by Friday Fictioneer authors, click:

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45 Responses to Celebration

  1. Moon says:

    The last two lines made me happy and sad.
    Lovely story, Jan.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Dear Jan,

    It seems we both chose nostalgia this week. I love the banjo clip. Lovely piece all the way around.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • Jan Vanek says:

      Thank you, Rochelle. How could we not feel nostalgic when we looked at Fatima’s photo? I loved getting to know a bit about your Uncle Harold. Amazing how 100 words can share so much about a man, and about his influence that I believe will live through the generations.

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  3. Lovely story. You packed a lot into 100 words. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Iain Kelly says:

    A touching and sweet story Jan, nicely done.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. trentpmcd says:

    Very sweet. One of my first thoughts was of a child’s imaginary tea party, but you took that idea to another level 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Dale says:

    Such a touchingly beautiful tale, I think many of us would love to have our tea parties again…

    Liked by 1 person

  7. jillyfunnell says:

    Lovely story – the make believe woven in so sweetly.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. lisarey1990 says:

    A beautiful father and daughter story. Love it.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. granonine says:

    Sweet. I miss my dad 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • Jan Vanek says:

      Linda, I’m lucky to still have my dad, but as I age and he ages, I know the day will come when I’ll miss him, too. It’s what makes me appreciate the time I get to spend with him. ❤

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  10. pennygadd51 says:

    What a delightful story you’ve written for us, Jan. Your twist is quite a big one, and yet you handle it with such delicacy and finesse. Lovely work!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Jan Vanek says:

      Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Penny. Delicacy and finesse–it’s what this sometimes heavy-handed, lumbering writer strives for. 🙂 And it’s exactly why I love Friday Fictioneers–we don’t have enough words to be lumbering.

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  11. athling2001 says:

    What a beautiful story. I love it, particularly the ending. By the way, you probably don’t need the comma in the first sentence.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. What a lovely story… my father would have hundred years old now… but I think he would come and rant about politics if he was still alive.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Jan Vanek says:

      Thank you, Björn. I can imagine it’s impossible to believe your dad would be 100. I have to admit, if I came back, I’d probably rant about politics, too. 🙂

      Like

  13. That’s such a lovely bittersweet tale Jan, tugs the heart at so many places.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Dan Bohn says:

    A banjo playing dad. How cool is that? Tender story Jan.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. James McEwan says:

    I gasped with delight, this is lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

  16. A beautiful yet bittersweet story. Our loved ones live on in our memories of them. It’s important to celebrate them even when they are gone.

    Liked by 1 person

  17. Dahlia says:

    A beautiful piece.

    Liked by 1 person

  18. Beautiful story. I liked the positive spin on this one. Refreshing take on the prompt.

    Like

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