See that window up there on the left? That’s the bedroom I shared with my sister.
Every day after school, we’d stop to watch boxers duking it out before we reluctantly trudged upstairs to do homework. I was always fascinated by the boxers’ fancy-stepped dancing—the weaving in and out that almost always saved them from the “hit.”
But, my sister loved the fight. She’d watch, studying wide-eyed and unblinking as a gloved-hand slammed into a scrunched-up face. Sometimes, her hand mimicked the boxer’s, swaying through the air, ready to duke it out.
Guess who had fewer black eyes?
THE END
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Thank you for another great photo prompt, J. Hardy Carroll. It inspired me to write this little “creative non-fiction.” 🙂
I liked the two personality types you created here
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Thank you, Neil. They are very “loosely” based on two characters I know very well. 🙂
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Dear Jan,
As always you are a master at characterization. In a few words I would know which sister was which. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m glad you “got” it, Rochelle. That morning, as I was leaving, Steve said, “Hope you don’t get any black eyes today.” I said, “Huh? I’m not the one getting the black eyes!” 🙂 So I wasn’t sure if that was clear. Thank you!
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Excellent, there’s more than one way to win a fight 🙂
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True, Iain! If you didn’t know, the dancer is based on my tendency to avoid conflicts at all costs. It keeps me from getting black eyes. 🙂
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The one who can bob and weave the best 🙂 Loved the characters.
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Thank you, Linda. I’m a bobber and weaver myself. 🙂
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Good characterisation, and fluently written.
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Thank you, Penny!
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Those who don’t want black eyes better stay out of the ring.
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Very true, Alice! Dancing is so much better than “duking.” In my humble opinion. 🙂
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I love the two different characters. So often the case in families, eh?
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Isn’t that the truth, Dale? I’m amazed how differently we can all turn out, even with the same parents. 🙂
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Great witty take on the prompt. Very enjoyable to read.
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Thank you, Jilly! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Ouch. Doesn’t sound like a fair exchange.
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I suppose it all depends on how well one dances or dukes. 🙂 Thanks, Sascha!
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Ha ha ha. A great story on perspectives.
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Thank you, Anurag! A perspective can change the way we live our lives. 🙂
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Ah… the dancing is always the better option in my mind.
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I loved the reality of Dancers and Dukers. When finished I had to scroll up and find the window up on the left. Dunno why,,,, I just did.
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